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Still Alive

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:bulletyellow: 176/365
:bulletorange: the bokeh is 100% real.
:bulletblue: facebook
:bulletpink: 500px
:bulletgreen: tumblr
Image size
3888x2592px 6.64 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/64 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
42 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Dec 4, 2012, 4:06:34 AM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Sensor Size
22mm
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Okay, first I'll start with some positives. I love the blue bokeh in background! The dots are small enough that it looks like glitter falling in the background. The image projects kind of a nautical feel because it's mainly blue with a starfish and a message in a bottle. So nice job theming everything. All these reasons are why I gave you 4 stars on Vision. I think you really tried to plan out your image here and you did a nice job.

I gave you only 2.5 stars on Originality because I have seen many images like this one before. Yours is not unique enough that I will remember it tomorrow, or even an hour later. Experiment with more objects in the picture to try and make this stand out a bit more, or perhaps try for a more interesting angle/POV.

I gave you 3.5 stars for Technique because this is okay but it could definitely be better. I think you should have shown a little more of the bottle in the picture- it is blurred out a little too much and the viewer almost has to squint to tell that it is actually a bottle. Also, it's hard to tell if the white in the bottle is paper or a piece of fabric. Maybe make that part of the image a little more sharp.

Overall I gave you 3.5 stars for Impact because I really like the overall feel of the picture. I mostly see this picture as unfinished; you've got a great start here, but there's still several things you could do to make it more catching to the eye. Keep up the great work!